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Wraths of unholy screams play in my mind
The video plays no more as it starts to rewind
The darkness consuming the once bright light
Even though it feels good, I know it’s wrong
No more humming whatever was that song
There’s no more time to impatiently wait
Finally I can warmly feel the infinite hate
What ever is true, I’ve known not to be right
Feeling the ripping of what was my flesh
Dropping the steel and hearing the thundering pause
River like blood runs down my body with a cause
To end whatever’s left in this life’s mesh
Blood stains on the floor near a steel knife
And a body of one’s most painful life
This sonnet puts and end to my Trilogy.
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LostReality Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2005
this is awesome. wonderful wonderful job.
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monkeyfunky Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2005
this is an old one man, posted this on May 4th lol of 2004, but thanks anyways.
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LostReality Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2005
your welcome, cap'n
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monkeyfunky Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2005
*nod* Michael-kun
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monkeyfunky Featured By Owner May 5, 2004
*sigh* well I'm glad I finished it. Now to move on to something else. Maybe I should draw something, or continue with poetry, either way I'm doing something
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demonica621 Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
wow this has really deep emotions!! i love it!!! :+fav:
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LovelyJadedLoner Featured By Owner May 4, 2004
Wow, and my request is answered! I again, love this. So much emotion is in this. Wonderful job.
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monkeyfunky Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2004
just going through my old trilogy, remembering how hard it was to write all of that, and how hard it is going to be to finish my new trilogy Wall of Worlds
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